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THAT. IS. IT.
21 reviewsYou have recieved a very pissed off Sadie.. A VERY PISSED OFF ME.
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THAT. IS. IT.
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2013-05-15
I'm going to go for a drive and try and fucking calm down.
Let's hope I get in an accident and it fucking kills me.
Need something? Email Gem. likeagem@live.com.
I fucking came back to this site last night to find out someone on here died, and this morning its fucking this shit again.THAT. IS. IT.
(#) NothingToProve 2013-05-15
Sadie, honestly
Stop being a fucking stuck up bitch. Ash did fucking nothing to you, but give contstructive critisism.
Get the fuck over it
And stop being such a fucking wuss, email me back or I swear I will say all my shit on hereTHAT. IS. IT.
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-05-15
Hi, Dave Strider.
Hi, Ryan. I'm so sorry. Please don't say that. Just calm down.
Guys, PLEASE, just stop!
I'm getting sick of this! Okay?! I understand, things, people, etc. piss you off. I know that feel! But seriously! Stop!
This site is becoming more and more consumed with drama each day! This is why some people left in the first place, and I'm not gonna stand idly by, watching quietly anymore!
Sadie, it's constructive critiscim! I get why you might be pissed, but seriously! You can't be pissed off everytime someone gives you critiscim because they just want you to improve. You can choose to follow it or not, and you can choose to handle it MATURELY or not. One thing I know: POSTING A RANT ABOUT IT WILL OT SOLVE ANYTHING. Alright?!
Ash, I appreciate that you're trying to make other people's writing better, because you mean well. I know you try to be polite about it and all and that's something that takes strength, but you can go around telling people to fix their writing. You mean well and I get it, but it's their writing. They come on to write what they feel, to express themselves, and you can't just tell them what to do. You can offer it, but it's up to them if they wanna do it or not. If you don't like it, don't read it. Now, I understand you. Again, I know you mean well, because you're a talented writer and you mean the best but others may not think that. I actually heavily agree with you on some things but yo have to cool it a bit, sometimes. You are AMAZING. Seriously.
Now, NEITHER of you will put words in my mouth("AJ implied I have bad writing" "AJ basically said she hated me") because that is NOT what I'm saying. You are both my friends, so either shake hands, call a TRUCE, and put it behind you or just don't make contact on this site again!
Now, STOP WITH THE RANTS!!!THAT. IS. IT.
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-05-15
Oh god oh god oh god what did i write ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod
i'm sorry to anyone in the middleTHAT. IS. IT.
(#) ColorfulShadow 2013-05-15
Sadie, it's constructive criticism just to help you improve. Self inserts are okay, just as long as you don't put yourself in it all the time. If you become an author who publishes books, nobody is going to want to read a book with a self insert in it. It's about time to ease out of the self inserts (sorry if I sound like a bitch).
I mean, sure the constructive criticism was sort of... harsh, but it's just criticism and writers need it to improve.THAT. IS. IT.
(#) Lilith_Bonez 2013-05-15
^^^Sometimes it's best to learn your mistakes on your own and not bitch about other people's writing style... You of all people should know words hurt -.-THAT. IS. IT.
(#) cj_warner94 2013-05-15
Wait, you are having a go because someone suggested some thing to improve your story, but rude tbh..
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