Categories > Celebrities > Motley Crue > Scarred Beauty
(#) Poppana 2013-05-27That's real sad, man. I haven't listened to Mötley Crüe in like ages. Anyway, I'd like to know where this goes, I feel bad for the chick.
If I can give you some pointers, though, maybe try spacing out the text? It's incredibly difficult to read text that is just one big block of letters, you know? Try paragraphs, maybe? :D
(#) kizz_crue 2013-05-27Omg this story is great! Please write more! I want to know what happens with Joanna and Frank/Nikki. I wonder if he'll feel bad? And I hope Joanna doesn't die...cause then she'll have no chance with Frank! Excited for the next chapter. :)
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