Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > call my name
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call my name
(#) VoodooLilith 2013-06-30
Ok, I'm hooked. I like the developing of the story line ,and the humor used. Looking forward to the next chapter :)call my name
(#) mychemicalpony 2013-06-30
Good everything really apart from the weird paragraph thing, like you'll start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence like "Gerard brushed his
Teeth and brushed his hair" and it makes it a bit hard to read, and also when you are saying you are, you write it as you're not your. But anyway, apart from that it's really good and I'm intrigued as to find out how Frank copes and stuff :)call my name
(#) Acid_Joker 2013-07-05
This is really quite amazing, in my pure opinion. But. You should check your redaction... Just sayin'.
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