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Secrets of the Outside World
11 reviewsTwo regular teenagers, Rain and Jayson, live in a closed in city created in the middle of a real world they have no knowledge of. When a creature from the Outside gets in, the two teens set out to ...
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Secrets of the Outside World
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-07
Way to rip off City of Ember. This isn't original. Try again.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-07
Oh god. I'm getting out of hand now. I seriously thing it's time for me to leave this place.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-07
*think.
Sadie - don't take any notice of me. I've probably gotta get anger management counseling.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2013-07-07
Claire, don't leave. A break might be a good idea though. I know that when I feel like I'm about to get nasty on someone from this site, I take a break.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-07
I like that idea, a break. A break is what I need. And not a breaking of a limb, even though that could possibly be happening again seeing as I might need surgery and in order for that to happen they have to rebreak my leg.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-07
S'alright. Means everyone's under my command again.Secrets of the Outside World
(#) Sam41 2013-07-07
I have a question doll, have you ever watched or read the City Of Ember? Because the startbSecrets of the Outside World
(#) Sam41 2013-07-07
FUUUCK
*The start of your fic sounds nearly exact to the novel/movie hun
This plot twist of yours better be unexpected, because yeah
The idea has been published long before this hun :|
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