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Severing Bonds
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Bikerhead69 2013-07-09
That was really great took me freaking hours to read it.
Please have mei includedmin one ofmtour haremEroninja
(#) Crimsonnaz 2013-07-09
Once again u surprize met with a fantastic chapter.
I must admit there were some things i suspected but more then enough things i didnt happended aswell.
Ill be sure ti post on ur deviantart when i get the chance to read it again and find all the minor details u might have put in for next chapters.
ALSO YES FUKA !!!! there is like only one other good story with her in it :DEroninja
(#) renner 2013-07-09
I'd like to see Sasuke come back from that damage without side effects. Without the summit Tobi doesn't have the stage to declare war, unless something else happens, which might benefit him anyway.
Love the story. Feel a little bad for Anko but also hope those fantasies remain unfulfilled.
Looking forward to what happens next.Eroninja
(#) Kyukon 2013-07-09
It's a pity Sasuke didn't die here... I guess he still have some uses for you. Looks like that incomplete susano'o is enough to take most of the damage from rasenshuriken if that duck-ass survived...
Next chapter is titled "Reunion"... reunion with who, I wonder... Kushina and Mikoto? Oh well.
I'll definitely looking forward for Mito and Samui chapters.
Keep up the good works and update soon.Eroninja
(#) nimistar 2013-07-09
loved the beat down sasuke got, best part of the chapter.
i still don't see how the naruto/kurenai relationship will work out. i get the feeling she would be quite bitter towards naruto at this point, since he is at least in part responsible for the attack on both asuma and the village. with her grief i would guess she would use even a weak excuse like that to vent her anger and hatred on him.Eroninja
(#) Jarjaxle1 2013-07-09
I man....Seriously...Somewhat Hoped that You would No kill Asuma and Put Kurenai in Naruto's Harem...You really Did Very Shitty Thing To Her..... Killing her Baby....My Deepest Sympathies...
Yey Samui is chapter 47....Can't wait that..one the most expected chapters and of those Chapters that i Have really Waited for..Her Scene With Naruto and Her Chapter over all Must Be Epic....
Aaah....Really...Really loved How You Fucked Sasuke Up....Bastard Deserves Even Worse...XD
Bee WIll Scream When Angry Yugito get's Her Hands On Him...and please Plus on that His Brothers Anger...XDEroninja
(#) alec_potter 2013-07-09
Great chapter. Really liked the way things have been plotted.
Sorry for Kurenai, but great for Naruto :)
The fight was very good. Interesting the way you have made Yugito's new power. Wonder what will be Naruto's power up.
The thought of having Konan speak to Konoha shinobi was a very good idea. Hope her confrontation with Obito/Madara goes well.
Keep writing, this is a great fic and always the update is eagerly awaited.
Eroninja
(#) BlackRevenant 2013-07-09
Not sure how I feel about all the seriousness.
I kinda miss the lighthearted feel a lot of the earlier chapters had where the only worry was keeping his lovers happy.
As a result of the seriousness of these last few dozen chapters this story has gained as much as its lost. As before when it first started I loved this story and recently I told you before I've been kinda meh about this turn. Not as excited as before but very interested in your growth as an author and the skill it takes to mix smut with plot and it not be some halfassed story.
Rev
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