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Severing Bonds
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Tutenstein 2013-07-09
Awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. I hope Naruto continues to train to surpass his current level.Eroninja
(#) TheWikedTruth 2013-07-10
Great chapter, that fight with Sasuke at the end was epic.
Can't wait for more.Eroninja
(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-07-10
About to call after him, she was pushed roughly to the side by Tamaki. “Get a clue why don’t you.”
She is just a shop keeper so why is she acting so uppity? Need to reread some of this.
Naruto noticed that the light of one of his eyes seemed to have faded as Sasuke raised a shaking hand as if to still strike him down.
...it pretty much is. Based on what is shown in canon Sasuke has extreme nerve damage and his chakra coils are erased. IN order to regain it he would have to sacrifice his remaining eye since no healing technique can repair the damage and that is assuming he can even send the chakra to eye at all. Even if he could with the damage he would be unable to control output. The kinjutsu would fail worse than one of Naruto's Bunshin no Jutsu's.
outside of the protagonist and the antagonist everyone else remains painful locked in their current power levels so that as greater and greater threats appear they get pushed further and further to the side.
Hinata has gotten some good screen time.but for the msot part its true.Eroninja
(#) pokemaster12 2013-07-10
Shit, this is an awesome chapter. I really liked how you handled all of these different plot points.
I don't really have much to say because I don't think anything I do say can really do anything more than highlight what I like right now, so I'll leave you here.Eroninja
(#) bakapervert 2013-07-10
Thanks for the update. Nice development with assaulting the Akatsuki here.Eroninja
(#) Kenshin_Ryuu 2013-07-10
I loved Naruto's fight with Sasuke. It was awesome to see Sasuke get beaten down. I loved Yugito vs Kisame as well for the same reason and her revenge idea against Kirabi. I can't wait to see that happen. Probably one of my favorite moments in the chapter was Konohamaru's rescue of Naho.Eroninja
(#) HeGotGame 2013-07-10
Great chapter. Considering how you only planned for it to be, what? 15,000 words? To see that more than doubled, with an additional 20,000 words on top of that, was nice, and completely worth the wait.
After last chapter, it was clear that Ino's rejoining of the Harem was a foregone conclusion considering her calling for Naruto's return during the invasion (like Sakura did in canon). Nice to see them reconcile and rekindle their relationship.
Kurenai's suicide attempt was at first a surprise, but is, in hindsight, completely understandable. Also, the little backstory with Anko was a nice touch, and her musings on her place with Naruto in comparison with other kunoichi (how she doesn't have the red chakra that signifies the love of a woman towards the man she is bound to) was good as well. Could you also provide similar insight into the thought processes of other Harem members, like Yuugao (who, despite joining Naruto pretty early on, still has green colored chakra)? Or is that for their respective 'Limelight' chapters?
Glad to see Harem members outside of Konoha getting featured a little bit as well, like Haku in her pursuit of Suigetsu, who had Zabuza's blade (what will happen with Suigetsu? He seemed to want to part ways with Sasuke); Mabui, accompanying Team Samui to Konoha; and Yugito, with her surprising prowess regarding the wielding of the chakra left behind by Yoruichi. She was awesome, kicking Kisame's ass. And despite the relative seriousness of this chapter, a light-hearted moment like when Killer Bee pulled off his tentacle switcharoo was welcome. To be honest, I at first didn't anticipate that, considering Kisame's involvement, but am glad that he managed to avoid the extraction ritual. The fact that they can use the Zetsu as substitutes for the ritual is a bit disconcerting, but not unexpected, considering you've made the Akatsuki a more worthy foe (in terms of power, intellect, and resourcefulness).
It was really nice to see Naruto head off thoughts and rumblings of vengeance against Amegakure by having him have Konan speak with a considerable amount of Konoha's residents. Alone, it would have sufficed, but Ino's interjection towards the end, to rebuff Chouji, of all people, solidified their newfound alliance with Ame. Using Naruto's upbringing as a rallying point was astute. It's not often mentioned how easily Naruto could have taken the dark path, and, as Hero of the Leaf, he is an appropriate role model when it comes to enduring hatred.
Shukaku... you'd think it would be more resistant to Kiyomi, Yoruichi, and Seven's extension of an olive branch, but the allure of freedom after decades of captivity was too great, I suppose.
And Sasuke, wow. He is now, beyond a doubt, irredeemable. His attempt on Mikoto's life, though, was completely necessary. In my eyes, there was no way Naruto would have resolved to kill Sasuke without that happening. As for the fight itself (specifically, the outcome), the assumption that he used Izanagi, as some may think, is incorrect. First of all, he doesn't even know the technique, and secondly, he doesn't have the mixture of Senju and Uchiha DNA that is necessary to pull off the kinjutsu. He survived the Senjutsu-enhanced Rasenshuriken, albeit with grievous injuries, thanks to his Susanoo. Would his Susanoo, after attaining the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, be able to withstand a high-powered Rasenshuriken like that?
Again, great chapter. An uplifting victory for Naruto and his allies against their greatest enemy, who, despite suffering a resounding loss, seek to regroup and return stronger than ever. It will be interesting to see how Naruto's presence alters Konan's sacrificial last stand against Tobi. I also look forward to Iwa's involvement in future events. Can't wait to see what you've got planned.
Thanks for updating, it is much appreciated.Eroninja
(#) Mastercappy 2013-07-10
Great chapter as always.
I would like to thank you for the b-day update, best present that I got. Of all the story's out there your is one of the best. I love the way you mix the lemon and the story. There as a lost of fic that have some story but to much lemon for it to be anything to spend time on, but you do it very well. Your is the only one I have an alert for because it is the only that is any good.
I must say I am hoping for a big lemon chapter like mojo soon. The story is fun and all but the chapters where Naruto is adding new women is all so a lot of fun. And I thing I speak for everyone when I say that I can not wait to see why and when Mei Terumī is add to the Harem. And how that will change the leadership in the frame work becomes out side of Naruto there is no one who can or will relay challenge Tsunade and that will make for a great plot point you can work with. Also Naruto, Tsunade, Mei will be all the big tit kage fun we are all looking forward to. But as always I trust you will get there in do time.
Keep up the good work and update soon and I will review soon!
Eroninja
(#) soccer-fan1 2013-07-10
Thank God, the chapter's name left me completely astray, through out the chapter i kept dreading that he was gonna part ways with one of his harem members, thank fully it was only with sasuke that he was sever his bonds with.
Once again an amazing chapter, nice to see some action blended in the story though now that this part is done and over with im hoping for some more lemony action.
I do wish that you would do something similiar with bleach as it is just not the same to only have the characters from it.
I wonder if when Kushina is gonnna be added to the harem, im hoping that its in one of the future chapter marked as ????.
Cant wait for the next chapter in all honesty, this is the best Lemon fic there is.
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