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Severing Bonds
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Jay-Frost 2013-07-09
pretty god damn impressive chapter, I cant wait for the next one and hope it only comes faster. Sasuke should be out of the stry for good by now as the Rasenshuriken destroys the very cells itself unless you changed how it works. this was the narutopedia article on it :P
"They(Rasenshuriken wind blades) also attack the entire chakra circulatory system, which cannot be repaired by any form of medical ninjutsu whatsoever. Depending on the severity of the damage, the victim may not be able to perform a technique ever again."
sooo maybe Sasuke will just be a cripple now cause it also severs the nerves and he doesn't have the regenerative capabilities of Naruto, anyways I hope Sasuke dies. Good luck and god speed on writing the next chapter to top this one ^.^Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-07-09
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading your latest update and I will be looking forward to reading your next update.Eroninja
(#) jayn22 2013-07-09
man....I just....whew! This was good I enjoyed the hell outta this chapter. It flowed much better than the previous one, and didn't give me that rushed feeling I got from the previous chapter.
About the whole Kurenai thing, honestly the minute you decided that pain wouldn't revive the villagers I just accepted it. It is what it is.
Is it fucked up? yeah. But babies are people too and people die all the time. It happens everyday in real life and every now and again in the manga so i don't see why people are so freaked by it happening here.
What you've done is present the perfect opportunity for her to be broken in the worst way possible but then to be healed by naruto and the others allowing her to come back stronger than ever.
The reviewer BlackRevenant said that they're not really feeling the seriousness and I get where he is coming from, but i'll have to say the opposite.
I feel you've done the right thing with the way you've handled the serious moments in this story so far.
I hate stories that are all angst or drama all the time, but this story from the very beginning had a plot and characters that would inevitably cause conflicts despite it's overall lighthearted nature.
I mean if this story was always lighthearted where naruto bangs everyone all the time but he, the harem, and other important characters have no emotional growth due to actual real life shit that could possibly affect them, aka a pure lemon story with nothing else going for it.
Eventually it would get boring, and actually you probably wouldn't even be able to end it accurately.
It's not like you could have naruto befriend tobi like he does everyone else in anyway that would be even remotely believable, and the same goes for people like madara. they aren't like garra who can be convinced to change his ways, they are fully committed and death or sealing are about the only ways, they will be stopped.
As an example, take one piece which as far as mangas go is wayyyyy up there on the list of lightheartedness and the importance of friendship, and yet they STILL addressed the issue of slavery, countless deaths and brutality inflicted by those in positions of power, and even the loss of loved ones like when nami's and nojiko's foster mother was shot or when ace was killed right in front of luffy after he did everything he could to save him and suffered a mental breakdown immediately afterwards which was also shown in great detail.
Those issues made the story stronger and although there are people who to this day don't like them, it benefited the story far more than it harmed it.
These are the types of situations that create lasting stories that have depth and can hook readers long after the story is finished.
I cant name off the top of my head the title of even one other naruto lemon story I've read, and I've read a few at this point,yet I've never once forgotten this one.
Despite the fact that this story has sex for days, I never hesitate to shout it out when people are looking for amazing naruto stories and thats because of how well you've handled all the areas of development for the story not just the lemon love moments. I really cant even call this just a lemon story because it's so much more than that.
Honestly I've been rereading this story for the past few days allowing to me to revisit things I forgot and look at your growth throughout it and you've grown so much as an author throughout the course of it that I more or less trust your judgement without question when it comes to where you want to take things.
I didn't agree on the way you handled nagato because I believe he is just as much a victim as others so for his end to be the way it was is kind of tragic, but I also understood why you took that route, so I accepted it.
Ultimately I think you've found a pretty decent balance of lighthearted ness, and seriousness when needed. I mean it's literally like what 30+ chapters of lighthearted sex and then the occasional serious fight or emotional content thrown in..who can really complain about that?
As long as your story isn't always death, destruction, loss, and angst I don't really see a problem.
Now on to sasuke.
Thank you. Thats pretty much it, just thank you.
I've lost all hope for the manga with all the fucked up ass backwards decisions that keep coming out of nowhere that Kishimoto keeps pulling out of his ass but his decisions concerning sasuke really kill it for me....that and the crazy amount of uber hacks and powerups the sharingan has received throughout the series. They should just be called the ultra mega uber god mode eyes of death, resurrection, destruction, manipulation, and reality warping at this point.
If you would've asked me at the end of part one or the beginning of part two if sasuke could be redeemed I would've said yeah sure, he's still an ass but sure. Now though, at this point in the series FUCK NO!
Yet even with all the shit he has done, kishi still keeps trying so hard.
So for you to actually take a realistic portrayal of what should happen instead of this bring him back from the darkness because we're besties, at the expense of everyone else kingdom hearts shit makes me happy. You can not save someone who doesn't want to be saved.
For all the epicness that the naruto manga represented since it's early days in 97, this last year has been a clusterfuck of failure with occasional awesome moments and I kinda just hope the story ends soon because I've lost most of my love for it.
There were other minor things that I wanted to address but since this is getting longer than I intended, i'll save them for next time.
As always great chapter, and looking forward to the next one.
Eroninja
(#) RjtheDestr0yer 2013-07-09
Damn it Sage! This story is just too addicting! How can you expect us to wait for two weeks?!? Lol
Very excellent chapter once again. Loved Sasuke getting what he deserves. Also liked having Sasuke's dark side consistently there. But then again we still dont know Sasuke's devious plan when "teaming" up with Naruto(canon).
I was surprised Naruto had a Hulk smash moment and missed attacking Sasuke. But then you revealed it was Kushina pissed off. That was a nice touch, and it just shows how effective you are in juggling characters.
Im surprised previous reviewers didn't recognize Sasuke used Izanagi. Looks like Sasuke is getting that EMS. Still dont like how that works and is obtained. Also loved that little history lesson about EMS. Damn it Sage you're just too much of a boss.
Great job of reconciling Ino and Naruto. Ditto with Kiyomi and Naruko. Looking forward to see what you'll do for Anko and Kiyomi.
Female Pain Path having the Rinnegan is a surprise. I am glad that she's not going to be a Bijuu's body. Wasnt expecting the Rinnegan though nice job.
I liked Konohamaru inclusion in the mission and Shika's words and gift to Naruto. You do a great job showing Naruto's relationships with his girls but since this is smut his male friends take a backseat. Yet you still bother to incorporate them in. It's probably why this chapter ended having more words.
Looks like TenTen, Yugito and Haku got their moments to shine. It's fun to see them kick butt. Plus Karin being competent in battle was another nice touch.
Interaction between Kurenai and Anko may not be canon but it just seems so right. It isn't original for those two to be buddies it's just they are meant to be that. I'm guessing it'll take awhile for her to join the harem if she ever joins but Mikoto doesn't seem too far.
Looking forward to what you're planning for Shukaku
Finally, loved Konan telling her story to Konoha. Great idea by Naruto to tell her to do that. I'm wondering how you'll change her fight with Obito. But I doubt she dies this time.
If it wasn't obvious, I loved the chapter. Great job sir!
PS I kinda made a mistake. I'm more of a cooler person. Besides you'll probably notice some differences in articulacy and amount of typos.Eroninja
(#) LeafRanger5 2013-07-09
I forgot you were planning Mito as well. This should be most interesting.
It's too bad Sasuke got away. But even worse what he did to his mom. That sucked.
Keep up the awesome work though man!Eroninja
(#) andrew7303 2013-07-09
another great chapter. can't wait to see how you bring back Mito in chapter 43.Eroninja
(#) turtlemaster16 2013-07-09
Yeah guren I was wondering when she comes in, as always great chapter can't wait to see Bee gets his ass kick!Eroninja
(#) TheCookieMonster77 2013-07-09
Ooh, I hope Reunion implying one between Yugito and Bee-I'm really looking forward to that XD
It would be nice to see some lightheartedness come back to the story, but you don't get any character development without angst so it's a bit of a catch 22. Still, it'd be nice to see some humor come back.
I like how you're getting into all of the character's heads, keep it up. Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!Eroninja
(#) Never_Ending_Dawn 2013-07-09
Big chapter. Most of it was fallout from the Pein invasion, and it was clearly handled very well. Konan's speech also made sense.
One thing i wonder is if Konan was told by Koyomi that Nagato's eyes were transplanted into him. She died in the manga with the belief that Nagato awakened the eyes. It likely wouldn't make a huge difference, but it might affect her own views.
If Sage has the fully awakened Rinnegan, wouldn't she be able to summon the Gedo Mazo? She could have simply summoned it to prevent Akatsuki from sealing what they believed was Bee. In fact, even if Tobi gains the Rinnegan from Nagato, i'm assuming Sage could overpower his connection with the Gedo Mazo because hers are a fully awakened Rinnegan instead of a transplant like Nagato or Tobi's. Either that or the two could simply keep summoning it to themselves in a tug of war.
Looks like Karin healing Sasuke in the Bee fight really made the difference. In this one Taka was gonna die.
No kage summit it seems. Actually happy about that somewhat. More difference from canon. Although wondering how the Tsuchikage can claim that the other kage worked with Akatsuki to steal Iwa's jinchuriki. He's the one that hired Akatsuki. So he's basically lying off his ass because he doesn't want to deal with Akatsuki. Wonder what the difference is from canon that would change his mind. Maybe because Kumo and Konoha both still have two jinchuriki, he's feeling a little self-conscious compared to where it was thought only Naruto was free.
Konohamaru is in on the plan. At least somewhat since he doesn't know the full story yet. He also is the one to point out where Sasuke is, and even gets to act as the knight in shining armor for Kaho.
Somewhat surprised by Shukaku's rather quick acceptance. He is suppose to be basically completely insane, so reasoning with him should have been a futile endeavor. Can't complain though. Keeping Shukaku sealed in a tea kettle to stop him from destroying everything would have been a waste.
The battles were good. Haku managed to reclaim Zabuza's weapon, Kisame had to somehow deal with a perfect jinchuriki? or whatever Yugito is by this point, and Sasuke finally turned to the darkside. Stabbing his own mother through the heart. You don't get more darkside then that. Sasuke finally got his ass kicked by Naruto. It's been a long time coming in my opinion. How did he know Izanagi though? He didn't know it when he faced off against Danzo in the manga, and this is about the same equivalent time. Guess Tobi must have told him about it. You know he's now going to take Itachi's eyes to negate losing one and because he now knows he's no match for Naruto in his current state. Bee is also going to get an ass kicking. I actually figured this was the real one despite picking up that Sasuke still managed to cut off a tentacle earlier in the chapter. I figured Kisame and Samehada wouldn't have been fooled. Seems Bee is too slick for them.
As for the poll,. I already voted,but i still have to say something. Matsu...please. She's my favorite Sekirei character, but she's very underappreciated in my opinion. She's like five voted from being in the top five. Won't mind if you don't use her though. Know you'll do good.
Great chapter, hope you update soon. 'Reunion.' I assume that is meant to mean Kushina and Mikoto will finally talk. Still have no idea how this blast from the past arc will work though. Are they Edo Tensei zombies revived by Kabuto or do they really go back in time? Unsure, but looking forward to it.Author's response
Thanks for the review.
To answer your question about the Rinnegan, I think it would be best to remember that technically the Statue would still under the last person to Summon it control. One reason I believe that it responded to Nagato was because Madara did summon it originally and then gave his eyes to Nagato. But for lack of a better phrase it never changed owners really. Sage has the ability to control it but first I imagine she'd need to establish a connection with it, to synch up with as it were before she could override the will already directing it. Which is alive and well in Black Zetsu
AS to Sasuke knowing Inzanagi are you so sure that is what happened. After all if he had used that jutsu yes his eye would have faded, but he would have appeared otherwise unharmed.
Thanks again for reading and reviewingEroninja
(#) blackbankai 2013-07-09
I wonder what will Naruto say to Tsunade about Tobi/Obito rescuing Sasuke.I hope that Madara doesn't get revived like he was in the manga.
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