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Severing Bonds
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) TheLordGeneral 2013-07-12
To be honest I don't completely agree with your characterization of Naruto and Anko's relationship . Relationships are not static entities but are constantly evolving . They require effort by both the parties involved to maintain . They also require the people involved in the relationship to change themselves so as to fit their partners needs and expectations . Meaning that even the people involved in a relationship are not static entities either . Both the people involved in a relationship need to grow and evolve in a manner such as they can meet their partners needs and expectations . This is an ideal situation and is so not always possible . What generally happens is that one of the partner's has a more dominant personality which forces the other partner to grow in a manner to fit his/her needs and expectations . If neither of the above two cases is possible since both the people involved are too stubborn then the relationship breaks up over time .
A simple example being a girl forbidding her partner from going to the pub and meeting his buddies every day of the week .
A middle ground would be where the guy agrees with the girl to go to the pub only on weekends .
If the girl has a more bossy or dominant nature while the guy is more accepting he will stop going to the pub altogether .
If both the partners are stubborn in nature then these minor disagreements are known to cause break ups .
My gripe with Anko and Naruto's relationship is that both are inherently very dominant personality's which are too stubborn to change . I don't think a long lasting relationship can be created between such people . Naruto can't change thanks to him being the centre stone which holds his family together while Anko doesn't want to change . The only way a lasting relationship with these 2 people will be created is if Anko grows and evolves in a manner such that she can leave these parts of her personality behind (since Naruto can’t accept her as is thanks to his other responsibilities). If such is not the case then a long term relationship between Naruto and Anko is unfeasible .
Also I know Naruto trusts his precious people implicitly but I would urge caution about the number of people he informs about his relationships since as they say Loose lips sink ships .
Eroninja
(#) TheLemonSage 2013-07-12
I'm not sure if I would completely agree with your assertion that their relationship is static. If anything it would seem that they are drifting apart as a result of Naruto's lack of desire or ability to fulfill a desire that Anko wishes to explore. This would imply to me that Anko's desires have evolved from when she first joined the Harem.
To me right now they are at that uncomfortable place where both parties know there is a problem between them but are unsure on how to approach it.
To your last point about him being too forthcoming. What you say is true, but at the same time while I can see Naruto not talking about his relationships, when asked by those he considers friends I can't see him outright lying to them.Eroninja
(#) Qazwsxedcrfv 2013-07-12
This might be one of the best days I've ever had. I had been a fan of this story back when I found it on FF.net, if what I remember is correct it was back when you posted the Yuugao chapter, so however long ago that was. Then when it got removed was a very depressing for me. I had no idea that you had continued it somewhere else until I happened to Google it yesterday morning, and god damn I was happy! I didn't even go to bed last night because I was to busy reading all the new chapters I missed!
And I must say that I have yet to be disappointed with anything you have posted. I have only become more and more amazed by how anyone can make such amazing character development and plot lines that revolves around porn. You sir (or madam) are truly amazing. At times I even find myself skipping over the sex scenes in order to get back to the plot.
I do feel bad however that I have never reviewed any of your chapters before, but not anymore! Know that I am a proud dedicated reader of this wonderfully smutty story and that you have my support! I made this account for the sole purpose of reading this story, I might as well use it for giving my feed back as well.
So good luck in all you future endeavors and keep up the good work.
Eroninja
(#) HellsPerfectSpawn 2013-07-13
Dude I know my knowledge of Naruto canon is not very extensive so tell me what will happen when Sasuke replaces his eyes ( even the blind one ) with Itachi's will this cause him to gain the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan in both eyes?
Also how is Tobi/Obito controlling the statue so well without the Rinnegan I thought that was necessary for controlling the statue .Eroninja
(#) NaruRikudo 2013-07-27
Whoa.....I think I get where the whole blast from the past arc is going.......and if I'm right.....it'll be epicly awesome!! But on another note, I hope you don't have Sasuke come springing back stronger than ever after receiving, an admittedly, not full powered Rasenshuriken, and not having any physical consequences. The reason is I don't see even Tsunade to be able to completely heal that kind of cellular damage, so there should at least be some kind of handicap, Perhaps do something to make it difficult to channel chakra for techniques anywhere but his eyes as a result of the damage to hos chakra network. Of course these suggestions are made under the assumption that you will keep him alive.
Either way, great chapter.
Eroninja
(#) The_caluba 2013-08-17
i always wanted to see naruto face sasuke. Although i don't think the fight would be so abbreviated, its still cool. And was that izanagi that sasuke used? if it was, it must have been incomplete. And i really dont like the thought of kurenai joining the harem but thats probably because i'm so african in my thinking. all in all, a great chapter. cant wait for moreEroninja
(#) xxconfusionxsucksxx 2013-12-23
can Yoshino Nara can be included in the Harem..and mm..i think i felt sorry with Taji,is there a possiblity that,you know she might be also join the club..hahaha..
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