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Chapter 23 Until the End of Every-
5 reviewsShowdown in the backroom of the club. Tristan does the only thing she can think of and saves someone she loathes more than anyone in the entire world
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Awake and Unafraid
(#) glostick86 2013-07-18
Oh my god!!!!
Someone is about to get their ass beat!!!!
But why would she cover for Matt??? I would have thrown his ass to the wolves!!!!
Update soon!!!Awake and Unafraid
(#) mcrobsessed99 2013-07-18
WHAT IS WRONG WITH MATT
TRISTAN WHY ARE YOU COVERING FOR HIM
love this story to pieces ♥ update soon!Author's response
I know right!!! What the hell is going on?!???
Thank you and I will. Thank you for reading and reviewing. It really means a lot and makes me want to continue this story!Awake and Unafraid
(#) kirziwirzi98 2013-07-18
^^ I agree with them two :) This update is awesome :) Why is Tristan so nice??
Update soon!! :)
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Thank you for the kind comment! I appreciate it. Tristan is nice lol, you'll see why later.Awake and Unafraid
(#) jack-the-ripper 2013-07-21
you know I really love the my chem song refrences you scatter around in the story, it really gives me the feeling that it's the songs and stories of My Chemical Romance that inspires you to write. which is awesome.
I loved this chapter! You're really good at action!
I can sort of see why she covered up for Matt, though lying to Gerard didn't strike me as a good idea haha.
Often in fiction, and fan fiction in particular, everything is so black and white. People are either good or bad and there's no in between. I like the way you've presented Matt as a dickhead basically, but also show a more humane side of him on this chapter. It still doesn't make him an angel, but it definitely makes him human.
There's a lot of dickheads out there, really, but quoite a few of them are actually evil to the core, you know?
And though Matt has definitely been in a side role in the story, there's some badass character development here :)
You rock!Author's response
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took to write this amazing comment!! It means so much that you continue to read and like my story. You have made my day, my dear!!Awake and Unafraid
(#) Death_Herself 2013-07-23
FINALLY! I AM CAUGHT UP!
It took me five hours but it was so worth it. Best fic I have read so far. When I was reading each chapter, it felt like the characters were right next to me, saying the lines they said in this story. On chapter 20 when Frank was freaking out at Gerard I actually the image of him being mad... which is shocking cause it seems like you will never see him mad.
When Tristan hit that brick against Jared's head I literally shouted, "You go girl!" I was lucky I was alone because that would have been awkward.
I can't wait to read what else is in store. Great job!
-patiently waits-Author's response
YES!!!
Thank you for this amazing review! Sorry it took so long for me to respond! I'll do better, I promise!!
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