Harry and gang finish up the last of their main business in the wizarding world then back to the wider galaxy.
- A decent enough read to enjoy it, but you need to decide if its Tara or Hermione that Harry's dating. I noticed changes in names within the same sentence at least twice. I lost count of the changes inside of a paragraph. A little proofreading can pay off in a big way.
Although I like the plot in the story, Harry is a little bit overdone. Hard to get the warm fuzzies about someone who doesn't need anything or anyone.
Author's responsesorry about the Hermione and Tara mix I'm writing multiple stories on different fan fic sits. So some times I type in the wrong name for a character I'm writing a story around.
(#) LucaWookieScars 2016-09-22I know its been a few years since you updated this story. just wanted to say very well done. I am hoping that you will continue and it would be interesting to see how Harry does vs the system lords and the wraiths especially if he can get the space station weapon you mentioned early on in the story to work or be replicated. Another note maybe he does get notced by the asgardians or another unknown good aligned race and he forms an alliance. just thoughts, again good story.
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