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Tester
(#) Poppana 2013-07-24
Oh no, somebody's in trouble, isn't she :) I loved reading another glimpse of their lives. It's really interesting to me. I just wonder what sort of trouble they had, as it was mentioned that they sorted things out or something or other.
The spacing was definitely better, thank you for that. Much easier to read. I noticed some minor typos but that's fine.
I also got the sense that this may have happened before the first part? Am I right?
Anyway, I really love this couple :D They have a cute relationship, though at times I suppose for me it would be too cute, if you know what I mean? If I guy started talking about white roses and my pure soul to me, I'd ask him where he left his testicles... But it's cute all the same, don't get me wrong! :D I love it that they're so much in love.
I wish I could read more, but I suppose I understand that you wouldn't want to put the entire story up. It's your decision and if you don't want to do it, I'm not going to cry about it. But hey, good job.Author's response
Yes :) And so do I. It's just intriguing. Anyway, thank you for the awesome review. And good. I went back and made sure I spaced it all.
Yes, this is a previous part to the story I'm developing.
That's what I thought. I like manly men, but I thought that I wanted him to have a soft side. You don't see that very often in guys. I wanted to make him as very unique as possible.
Thanks again,
-Andrea
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