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The Ero-Game
(#) TheLastNanaya 2013-07-26
Hate mail? Bah, you're not even worth it. Why start this fic if you actually have no ideas at all. Wanting help is fine and all but... well, first chapter is all about stats and prologue. There's no substances at all. You should at least have planned around five chapters with lemons which the driving factor of this fic. Wanting help when you're not even that far... Yeah, my advice. If you have no idea what you're going to write past the first chapter and needing help on ideas(really, who cares about outfits!?), then you might as well stop writing to save yourself and us the trouble.Author's response
You know what, I'm getting fucking tired of fuck panty-waisted virgins like you telling me how to write my fucking story! If you think you can do better, then fucking well do it!! Don't sit there telling me how to write when you don't have even one god damn story to your name! Over 6,000 people have read my story, I'm sure some of them didn't like it, but I'm also positive most of them did. so as soon as you have a story that has over 6000 views you can come back and talk your shit but until then, GTFO & TAKE YOUR FAIL WITH YOU!!!The Ero-Game
(#) M_D_K_95 2013-07-26
what bout black cargo pants, shert and combate boots. with black armor with red hi-lights and trim for chest, arms, legs and hands. a mask might be good to.Author's response
It has merit, but I have some questions. By armor do you mean the flak jacket that everyone and their grandma has in Naruto or some actual combat armor? as for the mask, Do you want an anbu mask, a flat hokey mask, or the Kakashi cloth demi-mask?The Ero-Game
(#) slicerness 2013-07-26
... You do realize no one cares what he's wearing, right? As long as he changes out of the orange jacket and pants anyway.Author's response
I know, but fan interaction helps me sort through the half finished story arcs and plot devices that are in my head.The Ero-Game
(#) infamous5212 2013-07-26
If you're lazy, you could just reverse the color scheme. But in my opinion, he shouldn't completely ditch the orange, it would feel like Naruto. I'm thinking black jacket or long sleeved shirt with orange trim. All black pants and a belt with either combat boots or the traditional sandals.
Have him wear his headband either around his waist like Rock Lee, hanging off his belt like a chain, or on his neck, like Hinata or Temari. I can't draw so I can't give you a visual representation, sorry.Author's response
Thank you for supplying number six for me, now I just need to get to the point where I can add them to my story and I'll be set. And don't worry about not being able to draw your idea. I have a very vivid imagination.The Ero-Game
(#) infamous5212 2013-07-26
*wouldn't
Google Chrome thinks they know grammar better than I do.Author's response
That's why I use Firefox.The Ero-Game
(#) Guydum77 2013-07-26
give him samurai armor in orange reminisont of the first and second hokages, a black trench coat with mulitaples seals to hold things worn with a orgnge t shirt, a pair of steel toe boots and a pair of blue jeans. give him some difrent combanations of shirts for te wrestThe Ero-Game
(#) Guydum77 2013-07-26
give him a chakra powered battle armor like the iron man suit. give him a chain that can become a spear.The Ero-Game
(#) onyxphoenix 2013-07-28
Black Shirt w/ dark orange trim, Black pants w/ dark orange trim, black flack jacket, and the Jacket from the invasion of pain arc with the kanji for maelstrom on the back just black w/ dark orange flames and the kanji in dark orange and black ninja sandalsThe Ero-Game
(#) Captainjack3000 2013-09-27
look at the form you have like 38 idias nowAuthor's response
Give or take a few. Now I just need to get to the point where I can Put them into the story. To use a quote that best sums up my situation, "My muse is a fickle bitch with a very short attention span!!"The Ero-Game
(#) loveroffanfics 2013-10-05
I could have sworn I left a review about what I thought naruto should be dressed in but its not here, well I thought about the coolest and mmosst badass males characters from games and anime and came up with 10 but since I cant remember them ill make some new ones
1.squall lionheart(ff8) fox where lions are and orange fluff(I agree with infamous its not naruto without some orange)
2.tidus(ff10) orange netting on right leg and a fox head medallion
3.cloud(ff7 advent children fox where wolfs are orange tinted metal(chain, zipper, etc..)
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