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Broken Promises7 reviews
(Frerard one-shot) When Frank and Gerard meet in a twist of fate on a rooftop, neither of them had thought it would end like this. *TRIGGER WARNING*
(#) Fronk-EyeEarOh 2013-08-22I honestly started crying at the end of this.
It is such a beautiful story, and the way you managed to portray the depth of their sadness is one of the reasons that this story is so moving.
I love it. You are talented and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Author's responseAww thank you :) It really means a lot to me since I'm new at this. I appreciate your feedback.
(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-08-23You accurately described a very broken person (IMO). My heart damn near wrenched out of my chest when I saw the letter from Frank to Gerard. When someone is that unstable, a tendency to emotionally depend on someone else is (in many cases) a really bad thing when that other person can't give them the type of "attention" they need.
I love the way this was done in first person, it made it seem that much more real.
Author's responseThank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback. It really means a lot to me :)
(#) CyanideCola 2013-08-23right gimme a minute i just have to go and get a box of kleenex tissues because i am drowning in tears at the moment
i am actually typeless this is just too awesome and beautifully sad
Author's responseThank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry if it made you sad though, I didn't really think it was that much. But anyways, thank you for your reivew! I always love getting them
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-08-25Oh wow, you actually succeeded in making me cry and I very rarely cry, like practically never, this is so sad and heartbreaking and beautifully written. Unrequited love is so tragic ;_;
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