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Broken Promises
7 reviews(Frerard one-shot) When Frank and Gerard meet in a twist of fate on a rooftop, neither of them had thought it would end like this. *TRIGGER WARNING*
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Broken Promises
(#) Fronk-EyeEarOh 2013-08-22
I honestly started crying at the end of this.
It is such a beautiful story, and the way you managed to portray the depth of their sadness is one of the reasons that this story is so moving.
I love it. You are talented and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Xo MeeMeeAuthor's response
Aww thank you :) It really means a lot to me since I'm new at this. I appreciate your feedback.Broken Promises
(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-08-23
You accurately described a very broken person (IMO). My heart damn near wrenched out of my chest when I saw the letter from Frank to Gerard. When someone is that unstable, a tendency to emotionally depend on someone else is (in many cases) a really bad thing when that other person can't give them the type of "attention" they need.
I love the way this was done in first person, it made it seem that much more real.Author's response
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback. It really means a lot to me :)Broken Promises
(#) CyanideCola 2013-08-23
right gimme a minute i just have to go and get a box of kleenex tissues because i am drowning in tears at the moment
i am actually typeless this is just too awesome and beautifully sad
well done
keep writing
Jade xøAuthor's response
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry if it made you sad though, I didn't really think it was that much. But anyways, thank you for your reivew! I always love getting themBroken Promises
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-08-25
Oh wow, you actually succeeded in making me cry and I very rarely cry, like practically never, this is so sad and heartbreaking and beautifully written. Unrequited love is so tragic ;_;
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