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Death's Child
(#) ralphmullins 2013-09-01
Awesome chapter and story . I can't wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if you plan to make this story a major or minor crossover? Like Lord of the Rings or Star Wars series or Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Stargate SG-1/Atlantis/Continuum/Ark of Truth or Merlin or Star Trek series or Legend of the Seeker.Death's Child
(#) bob26 2013-09-02
I like it, is this a crossover?
will Harry have a single or many ladies? just what is hiss relatiion ship to the ladies?
Death's Child
(#) pfeil 2013-09-02
So glad to see you still writing!
Astra is a necromancer, I take it?
I'm somewhat confused by the timeline. Has she already been with Harry for a week?
Any chance of seeing Astra and Hermione's discussion soon?Author's response
Yes a week pasted between chaptersDeath's Child
(#) lordamnesia 2013-09-05
Very well done! I love how this story is going, so against what Dumbles did in cannon. Keep up the excellent work!Death's Child
(#) jabarber69 2013-09-06
Great Chapter to this OUTSTANDING STORY....but what took you so long???Death's Child
(#) yargew 2013-12-01
I am greatly enjoying your story. I look forward to your villains--they must be fell indeed to need do powerful an enemy as your Harry. And I imagine that DeeDee might be bit cross with Lord Flight from Death.
Shoukd be great fun. Please keep it coming!Death's Child
(#) discb 2013-12-31
I really enjoyed what you've written so far and hope that you'll continue on with this tale.
That being said, do take a breath and slow down. There are some points where you try to jam more ideas in a sentence then there are letters. Try to let it flow a tad more, flesh out the relationships and characters before hitting up the next major point in the story. You've got a quiet but devoted fanbase, we aren't going anywhere so relax and take your time.Death's Child
(#) yargew 2014-01-11
I find myself very much enjoying your story and earnestly hoping you can continue it soon.
I like the basic irrelevance Dumbles has so far. It will be great fun seeing him try his condescending grandfatherliness on someone who learned the ropes from Death herself.
Please continue this wonderful story!
Thanks,
T.G.H.
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