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The Doctor
(#) JustAGhost 2013-10-14
It's a beautiful piece of work. You ask for criticism but I'm afraid I cannot give any as there is none to give. PerfectAuthor's response
Ahh! This made me very happy and wow I'm really excited thank you so much Bec I love you so much!! < 3The Doctor
(#) lolhai 2013-10-14
I like all of the imagery, but it felt kinda forced to me?Author's response
Really? I didn't mean it to be like that. I guess it was kind of forced because the topics I usually write about are so fucking dark I don't let anyone see and I tried to make myself write about something that was less macabre and less distressing.The Doctor
(#) lolhai 2013-10-14
It's almost like you wrote this FOR the contest.Author's response
I kind of did? That was it's purpose.
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