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1 reviewSun Hill has always been at the centre of complicated love ties but could this one beat the bunch? WARNING ff
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Change Partners
(#) bride_of_nickula 2005-09-24
Some lovely imagery at the start dancing elephants :)
A bit more narrative would help propel the story forward, but I do like the dialogue, it sounds authentic and I can imagine the characters saying these lines.
Is it too much for me to expect for Gabriel to meet a horrid death? :D
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