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• Eroninja

  (#) speedingticket280 2013-12-02

  Joki-Boi's comment about the ultimatum has me thinking you're going to put Kurenai with Kiba...I hope I'm wrong

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  (#) Xunzar 2013-12-02

  I'm not inclined to bother ranting as some have. I've enjoyed the story, although the darkness has been a bit off-putting, it is pretty much unavoidable at some point.
  
  All that said, good times reading this. I can't help but think that you've got something really great here and it can get better.
  
  I did notice a huge degree of grammatical issues, but somehow I was able to just read past them for the joy of the tale.

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  (#) pokemaster12 2013-12-07

  Awesome job. I don't have much to say about this chapter, other then it looks like things are heating up. I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

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  (#) Batros940 2013-12-08

  I'm bothered by the fact that Rangiku went on her own to kill Joseki thus causing trouble for Garra and Naruto. However they could make a argument that since Shukaku and the other Biju were taken from the akatsuki by a unkown group it could be this group who killed Joseki and not Garra. It seems that the Diamyo is fully against Garra and isn't willing to give him the benefit of a doubt.

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  (#) blackbankai 2013-12-08

  i wonder if karura was the one who had joseki killed.i hope that naruto will uncover the truth very soon before gaara is executed.

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  (#) Vegito786 2013-12-09

  I don't know if anyone else has mentioned this before so i apologize if i'm repeating what they said but in a previous chapter you wrote how Tsume is also a childhood friend of kushina's and yet she hasn't even visited her once, i think it would be really interesting to see the both of them interact considering the inazuka's now sleeping with her son.

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  (#) boredrandom 2014-01-23

  this has been a great story so far butt seeing a second main character with a harem is a massive turn off for the story.

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  (#) loganhunter2 2015-02-08

  The story is great, it really is but by God those politics are bull.....in no moment in canon did any of the daymio seem to antagonize so much the characters. ....i know fanfiction is a newonderful door but since this is still in the canon verse (kinda)and you keep most characters canon I figured that the daymio would be ...can't wait till this arc is over 9 / 10

  Author's response

  Thanks for the reviews. To explain the point of the Daimyo to me canon uses them rather stupidly. For example, when you consider that the current shinobi system has existed for about 100 years letting the Shinobi handle all their military affairs seems like an awful lot of trust for what could have simply amounted to some grand experiment, especially one where the new military power decides it no longer needs the old governments.

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  (#) aVaWolfe 2017-04-23

  Your chapters keep getting better!!!

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  (#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-24

  Damn kabuto sure is an asshole when he wants to, no wonder he is orochimarus copy but damn he could have made a great tragedy only because he wanted to study naruto...yeah he has a lot of problems. Poor tifa, her joining naruto was dampened because of kabuto and the daimyo...I hope the daimyos die because they don't deserve to live with all the shit they pull.

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