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Fly
(#) Queenessofmyworld 2006-08-08
I loved the story i'm glad it has a sequel!! Its funny how he screamed did he scream like a little girl?Fly
(#) DeepS8ter23 2006-08-10
I love it too! They may have special powers but, you can totally relate to the charters!Fly
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-08-11
Its pretty good! Now to read the sequal. Runs off
*Gummy Bears take keyboard*
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We like the detail that you have but think you could have just a but more detail. Like what did Clark feel when he found out he was flying? How fast were they going higher and what clothes was Alison wearing? But all in all it was pretty good!
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