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From September
(#) Mirazal 2013-12-29
You're a good person, Lauren. This is a tough situation to go through and you came out just fine. I hope you don't blame yourself for anything because you've learned and you've changed and she's learned and she's changed and perhaps you were meant to be in each other's lives but only like this.
This was written really well. It hurts but that's alright. I hope you're alright.Author's response
nothing like this ever happened to me. I just think a lot. sorry.
I love you and u r rad.From September
(#) Mirazal 2013-12-29
Pretty deep stuff to think about then. Don't be sorry, I just didn't know and that's alright. "Sophomore year" should've been a hint, huh x-) but yeah that doesn't make it any less of a piece, it tells a cool story and the way you mirrored it was awesome. Like, 10/10.Author's response
thank you, dear. c:From September
(#) lolhai 2013-12-29
For me, that's the hardest thing about being gay. I cannot tell who is gay and who isn't.Author's response
that is hard.
I think for me, the hardest thing is not knowing who's going to be chill with you and who's going to freak out. idk it all just kinda sucks.
but at least girls smell good. #heckyeahFrom September
(#) lolhai 2013-12-29
I usually don't tell people until I get to know them really well. I've had one person not be ok with it, and even then we were still super close.Author's response
I've only told two people in my life and they were chill about it. I really just want to tell everyone b/c my girlfriend is hella and everyone should know that.
how did that work? them being super close with you and not being okay with it?From September
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-12-31
AWww
Lauren why do you write such great things?
NAY!
Gr9.
I love it (:Author's response
thank you! I guess you've just been rubbing off on me.From September
(#) SyraStrange 2014-07-14
To think you're disgusting for who you want to love and to want other to feel disgusting too, that's just shit.
And to love someone who won't love you back, that's pain magnified under a burning sun.
I love the way you write and what you write about.
-S
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