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Chapter 23: Sinking Into It
5 reviewsthe distance grows but they have no choice but to do it and sink deeper into ways to numb it
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Misfortune and Gold
(#) hayhayhayden 2014-01-04
Hmmmm. I think it shows promise, but it still needs work.Misfortune and Gold
(#) sgSixx 2014-01-04
thank you, it still has a long way to go. any advice wud be appreciated
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(#) hayhayhayden 2014-01-04
I would see if you could find some free online editing :)Author's response
is there such? im not really into the editing aspects yet, but i agree it needs some.Misfortune and Gold
(#) hayhayhayden 2014-01-04
Personally, I think its good to edit as you go along.Misfortune and Gold
(#) sgSixx 2014-01-05
well u have to keep in mind that im looking at an original completed manuscript and retyping word for word. Im doing it with a smart tv remote and its more like txting than typing. There r lots of errors because im just lazy. I leave out astrics and commas. I dont worry about misspellings. my original copy has been through the self editing and for the most part has all i's and t's dotted and crossed. here its kinda a hassle to get them in so i only bother really with seths punctuation which is an editing nightmare in itself trying to spell the way he enunciates things. so please overlook the mistakes. my point in this is the story line. plus u have no many idea how many times ive typed this...please forgive my laziness
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