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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2006-08-10
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER, all three chapters were awesome and I like the ramifications of the mating Fluer did, that was cool, it was a little bit underhanded of her to mate/bond him without asking him but I understand her reasons and I even applaud her for doing it, anyways you as always my friend do an outstandingly awesome job, do keep up the good work and update soon please:):):):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) wesley 2006-08-18
Oh man! I thought there was one more chapter still. I was so disappointed I was like sweet great chapter, reached for my mouse slid the arrow over where the next chapter button supposed to be and I realize its not there. I looked at the chapters and was like noo!!! I want more chapters. Please post again soon.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) twisteddagger 2006-09-04
This is a wonderful story, I don't often read Harry/Fleur fics, but this one is very well written. It may just be me, or you may be doing this on purpose, but you tend to jump around, one chapter the plot is going fairly quickly, then another there's very little to move the plot along at all. Now some of the chapters I see how your trying to devolp Harry's and Fleur's budding romance, but others I'm not sure if it's just because you couldn't come up with anything or if you meant to leave it to give the story more details.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) jamie 2006-09-10
cmon keep updating i can wait any longer its such a great storyThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-03-15
Outstanding chapter of an outstanding story. Well done.
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