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Commentre Brothero
0 reviewsSammy is your typical teenager as he starts his 2nd year of high school in Toronto & his two friends but a mysterious boy that happened to be his long lost twin brother that has to save the world.
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Prologue:
I was walking through a mysterious forest..I felt like no any kind of human. I had pointy ears and I could fly and this boy that looked just like me was beside of me smiling...he was my dream twin i called it as we would sit down and lay on the ground staring at the clouds. He would hold me tight like a big brother thing....but it felt like something different. I felt love and happiness. But this evil person that would try to destroy Commentre would try to come after us first because we were the most precious thing to the world and our parents which were the king and queen of Commentre. But they didn't know we were so close with each other for a long time but it should be wrong.......or should it not be...is it normal? My dreams were always me and him exploring the forests in Commentre and it was in a different dimension.....or planet i think. Either way I just felt so happy in my dreams but when I wake up, it's just reality as always. He isn't there and i got normal parents and a sister that is 3 years older then me. I was running with my dream twin which his name was Zen and my name was Ceon but he still called me Sam to make me feel better. All of a sudden I hear a distress yelling from across the forest and Zen tells me
"Get up we need to go see who's in trouble my twin....come with me."
His soothing voice drove me crazy....I immediadely followed him until we seen a girl that was a fairy that was tied up against the tree and there he was. "My dear twin warriors.....please help me! The evil one has tied me up to be eaten alive by these horrible beasts! Please stop him and set me free." I saw fear in her eyes....I started take apart the ropes tied on her crushing her body until she was set free. I turned around and saw Zen fighting him....he was wearing a hoodie and was throwing lightening rods at him until I started out of nowhere letting a huge pressure of wind out of my hands and he blew away where he would of got lost.
"Good work Sammy, I mean....Ceon...that is your real name after all...." He told me hugging me against him.
"Zen.....theres something I've been wanting to tell you for a long time and it's-" All of a sudden I started blinking
"Sammy, wake up." He said smiling
"W-wait! I wanted to say-"
"Wake up. Sam. Sam? | Sammy?"
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I was walking through a mysterious forest..I felt like no any kind of human. I had pointy ears and I could fly and this boy that looked just like me was beside of me smiling...he was my dream twin i called it as we would sit down and lay on the ground staring at the clouds. He would hold me tight like a big brother thing....but it felt like something different. I felt love and happiness. But this evil person that would try to destroy Commentre would try to come after us first because we were the most precious thing to the world and our parents which were the king and queen of Commentre. But they didn't know we were so close with each other for a long time but it should be wrong.......or should it not be...is it normal? My dreams were always me and him exploring the forests in Commentre and it was in a different dimension.....or planet i think. Either way I just felt so happy in my dreams but when I wake up, it's just reality as always. He isn't there and i got normal parents and a sister that is 3 years older then me. I was running with my dream twin which his name was Zen and my name was Ceon but he still called me Sam to make me feel better. All of a sudden I hear a distress yelling from across the forest and Zen tells me
"Get up we need to go see who's in trouble my twin....come with me."
His soothing voice drove me crazy....I immediadely followed him until we seen a girl that was a fairy that was tied up against the tree and there he was. "My dear twin warriors.....please help me! The evil one has tied me up to be eaten alive by these horrible beasts! Please stop him and set me free." I saw fear in her eyes....I started take apart the ropes tied on her crushing her body until she was set free. I turned around and saw Zen fighting him....he was wearing a hoodie and was throwing lightening rods at him until I started out of nowhere letting a huge pressure of wind out of my hands and he blew away where he would of got lost.
"Good work Sammy, I mean....Ceon...that is your real name after all...." He told me hugging me against him.
"Zen.....theres something I've been wanting to tell you for a long time and it's-" All of a sudden I started blinking
"Sammy, wake up." He said smiling
"W-wait! I wanted to say-"
"Wake up. Sam. Sam? | Sammy?"
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