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"That couldn't be real, I was dreaming." she whispered to herself as the memories got a little stronger. There was no way she had been on 'date' with Bryce Klemer. She was positive she had gone hom...
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Lost In You
(#) rachel032687 2015-02-08
I liked this. It was a fun read. There were a few structural issues though.
EX: When you have her say she's never felt so good, you placed good before so (A cute way to fix that would be to have her laugh and correct the drunken admission). Also, towards the end where he tells her it was nice to meet her again, you have that a little jumbled.
Any way, thanks for sharing.
BTW, given that I reviewed, if you would like to return the favor, please check out my story Where There's Smoke...
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