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A drabble on a place where people lie down and never speak
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Where People Lie Down and Never Speak
(#) LadyLunatheStrange 2015-01-31
"A little girl was the last person to move into the house. The townsfolk found her hiding beneath a home down on 3rd street. We still don't know her name, but I think the people in the stone house are good company for her."
It took me multiple times reading that line to realize... they found a little girl dead under someone's house! Lovely "drabble", I felt like I could step right out into it.
I especially loved the part where they knocked the cross into the creek to say "up yours" to God!Author's response
Whoops, meant to respond, not add a new comment. Still really new to this. Thank you for your kind review!
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