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Chapter 2 The Awaking Of The Guardian Tiger
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Harry Potter And The Tiger Coven
(#) TimeMage 2015-03-19
You need to break up the paragraphs more. Its pretty hard to read as is.Harry Potter And The Tiger Coven
(#) Maxtaf 2015-03-20
You have an interesting start here. I'd love to see you expand it and write more.
You do need to get a beta reader, however. While the story idea is a good one, you could use some help with the pacing of a story. And a good deal of help with grammar, spelling and punctuation. Chapter 2 was only 12 sentences long. That really needs to be broken up. And edited for readability. Poor spelling and grammar turn a lot of readers off of a story, and even professional authors have editors. It's not a failing to get a beta/editor; it's an important step in producing a professional quality piece. The failure is in NOT trying to get one.
Personally, I am interested in seeing where this will go. You've already got my two favorite pairings already: HP/GW & HP/GD. The two of them together is awesome.
Thanks for taking the time to write for us. We appreciate your efforts.
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(#) KorinDragoon 2018-05-19
Did you know you have two postings of chapter one on your profile?Harry Potter And The Tiger Coven
(#) Wman123 2019-06-12
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Please write next that Snape should attack Holly and Ginny and Gabrielle should defend her and attack harshly Snape.
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