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Cartoons and Cereal
1 reviewHera moves in next to the Way's and find comfort in a young and troubled Gerard.
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Cartoons and Cereal
(#) PansyAngel 2015-07-10
Considering this is your first fic it's actually quite good, I enjoyed it. I found one small problem though, nine isn't bigger then ten lol, I think you just got the number wrong there though.
I have one piece of advice though with this being your first fic, always take bad reviews with a pinch of salt, I haven't seen any bad reviews in a long time but when I got my first bad review believe it or not but I was ecstatic because I then knew where I was going wrong. Just some advice there honey, I hope it helps.
S xxAuthor's response
Thanks! That was actually a typo though. It's been fixed!
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