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(#) studentnumber24601 2005-06-16Oh, man. I never get tired of reading this story, I love it to death. It remains the most beautiful fanfic I've ever read, and one of the few I can read over and over. (And it isn't even pr0n.)
I think I caught one tiny inconsistancy, though; it says that Jack's newsie days aren't "that far" behind him, but then it later specifies it's been 14 years since he and David got together. But I suppose that's all in the definition of how far is that far, or something. And it certainly didn't take away from the sheer beauty of this fic.
I think this is the third time I've reviewed this and the third archive where it will be on my favorites. loves
(#) falco_conlon 2005-06-17Just beautiful. A really sweet, moving story that's made me want to leap back into the newsies fandom head first. The repition is great and works nicely to convey the feeling that it is Jack reminising. I couldn't catch any mechanical errors and it flowed well so all I can say is very nice job ^_^
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