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The Enigma That Is
4 reviewsI'll never understand you. I love you but I hate you. You broke my heart yet I broke yours. You are the not so infallible Spot Conlon.
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The Enigma That Is
(#) studentnumber24601 2005-06-17
This... is a really good fic. Unless I'm on crack, it's also an old one (I believe the first one I ever reviewed on ffnet ^^) but it's still quite good. There are a few technical errors, but not enough to be distracting to anyone who isn't a punctuation nazi like me, but the tone of it is quite good. I also think it captures Spot's and Race's personalities quite well, if somewhat darkly. But hey, dark is good. :)The Enigma That Is
(#) Hotshot 2005-06-21
You see, this is the way to write Race. Key points in his character are that he's somewhat cryptic, and not so easily disturbed.
And the way he talked about Spot...ahhh...perfect. The way Spot is written is wonderful too. You're inspiring me to go and work on my 'Spot' piece. Ugh, the boy gives me a head ache but he is the only character I know who can come across like stone, which is very well portrayed here.
I demand more like it!
~hotshot~~~The Enigma That Is
(#) w1ckedness 2006-10-02
Oh sweet JESUS. That was SO good. The repetition of the first line at the ends stabbed me in the heart - if I were a vampire I'd be dead... Actually, if I were anyone... That would, you know, kill me... lol. But yeah, man... Good stuff.
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