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• A Good Night, No?

  (#) The-Dark-Side 2006-08-20

  Nicely done!

• A Good Night, No?

  (#) mememe 2006-08-20

  very good. please continue!

• A Good Night, No?

  (#) farnathia 2006-08-22

  Lovely story, very touching!!
  Thank you!

• A Good Night, No?

  (#) shadphenix 2006-09-12

  First of all, I liked it. Only a couple of points, I thought you might consider. While it would be fitting for Tia to speak French, she never does in the movie, so I doubt she'd speak so much of it otherwise, though it is an interesting take. Also, I find it just a tad strange that Elizabeth would be able to identify a type of tobacco. I think she might recognize there was something oriental about the taste. There are possibilities of her being familiar, though; perhaps you could explain? I know you have some leeway with a dream, but at the same time, you don't want to rely too heavily on it.
  
  I really liked this piece. A favorite moment was when she awoke and the leaves whisper something like, 'You could have had him forever if only you'd reached out your hand.' That was pretty powerful. Overall, a good piece and a different take on her feelings of guilt. Looking forward to your future work.

• A Good Night, No?

  (#) herk444 2006-10-04

  Trippy.
  
  Sorry to say, but I am scratching my head at the moment. A bit confused.
  
  Love, herkie

• A Good Night, No?

  (#) Ithilwen 2007-05-31

  You don't need a capital R in "rum."
  
  Excellent setting, very vivid, but are they at Tia Dalma's house or on a ship?
  
  Whenever a new character starts to speak, start a new paragraph.
  
  Wow. A non-canon pairing that isn't ridiculously OOC. Nice little 'fic.

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