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Elizabeth's night, as it is described here, is supposed to take place immediately after the end of Dead Man's Chest, so those of you who haven't yet watched that movie, wait with reading this story...
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A Good Night, No?
(#) shadphenix 2006-09-12
First of all, I liked it. Only a couple of points, I thought you might consider. While it would be fitting for Tia to speak French, she never does in the movie, so I doubt she'd speak so much of it otherwise, though it is an interesting take. Also, I find it just a tad strange that Elizabeth would be able to identify a type of tobacco. I think she might recognize there was something oriental about the taste. There are possibilities of her being familiar, though; perhaps you could explain? I know you have some leeway with a dream, but at the same time, you don't want to rely too heavily on it.
I really liked this piece. A favorite moment was when she awoke and the leaves whisper something like, 'You could have had him forever if only you'd reached out your hand.' That was pretty powerful. Overall, a good piece and a different take on her feelings of guilt. Looking forward to your future work.A Good Night, No?
(#) herk444 2006-10-04
Trippy.
Sorry to say, but I am scratching my head at the moment. A bit confused.
Love, herkieA Good Night, No?
(#) Ithilwen 2007-05-31
You don't need a capital R in "rum."
Excellent setting, very vivid, but are they at Tia Dalma's house or on a ship?
Whenever a new character starts to speak, start a new paragraph.
Wow. A non-canon pairing that isn't ridiculously OOC. Nice little 'fic.
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