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Chapter 2
After Harry and Tonks are forced to marry to avoid the Black family fortune falling into the hands of the Malfoys, what happens when the two of them have to stay at privet Drive? Why, Tonks find...
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A Family Affair
(#) Cypher3au 2016-02-11
Heh. Well, after all that, I doubt Tonks is going to be in the mood for dinner; her stomach's bound to be pretty full as it is.A Family Affair
(#) Nahte123456 2016-02-11
Well you got a bunch of complaining about cheating in the first chapter so I won't bother here. It was hot, as much as I love Harry and wish he'd just be happy the lemon was hot and I do hope for more, and by the warning of M/M in the final chapters I guess Harry will be happy to, happy as a fuck-slave but this is porn so you take what you can get.A Family Affair
(#) godman0083 2016-02-13
Please have Dudley have sex with all of the women that Harry has ever loved and even his mother figures. For some reason I think it's really hot that Dudley would take every one Harry has ever cared about because of his huge cock. Can't wait for the next chapter!A Family Affair
(#) sirus_92 2016-02-14
make harry became a girl like breaking the potter family
Author's response
In the Dudley story, Harry will be staying a male. That's both the way I want to write it, and the way the gentleman who requested the story wanted it.
There will be full on male on male scenes in chapter 5. If that's not your cup of tea to read, I can only suggest you stop reading at the end of chapter 4.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
James.A Family Affair
(#) Jeda26 2016-02-16
love the story so far. Have a quick question regarding the male sex in chapter 5 will it be a full on dudley dominating harry to show him his new place in his marriage to tonks, once tonks is all dudley's or will dudley turn harry into slutty sissy boy, look forward to the next chapter.Author's response
It will be option 1, domination through physical superiority. I would like to make it clear after saying that, however, that there won't be any physical violence.
I'm glad you liked it. The 2nd chaper gave me a lot of trohble to write, but I don't think the 3rd will take as long. I've started work on it, but my writing takes place between work, my social life, domestic duties and my other hobbies, so time for writing is limited, and I have non-smut projects too. Still, I hope to have it up in a couple of weeks, so the wait definitely won't be as long as it was for chapter 2.A Family Affair
(#) Kairan1979 2016-02-18
Please don't add M/M. It's humiliating enough he'll be forced to stay married to Dudley's sloppy seconds.Author's response
The M/M is both what I want to write, and what was specifically asked by the gentleman who requested this story. I've been wanting to write an M/M story for a while, but I haven't in my non-smut stories over at Fanfiction.net mainly because I don't like many of the male characters, and neither do the characters in this story. But in porn, that doesn't matter as much. In fact, in porn, I can make the dislike part of the relationship.
Also, I'd object to your second sentence. I won't get into the sexual inequality between genders that comments like that enforce, where a guy that sleeps with loads of girls is applauded, whereas a girl that sleeps with just a couple of guys is insulted, although you can tell that comments such as that annoy me, but it's not canon that there is no divorce in the magical world. So I've decided never to say it is in any of my stories.
I think that a marriage where you are forced to stay together isn't truly a marriage. Marriage is about choosing to be with someone for the rest of your life. You have to retain that ability to choose for the original choice to still be valid, in my opinion.
It's like the reason why I don't like that whole Soul Bond tripe. Forced love isn't truly love. Love is more beautiful when you choose to be with your partner, not when you are forced to, be it by a soul bond or magically enforced marriage vow.
That's why I think Paladeus' story, Death's Pride, is the only story that does Soul Bond's well. Because the characters retain their ability to choose whether they want to pursue the relationships.
Basically, the M/M scene is happening, and Harry is going to choose to stay with Tonks afterwards, not be forced to.
I'm sorry that you're not pleased about that, but I understand that it's not everyone's cup of tea. It won't be happening until chapter 5, so if you want to read chapters 3 and 4, those are going to be straight, guy on girl sex scenes.A Family Affair
(#) joey8 2016-02-19
Really enjoyed the pay off for this chapter.
You mention the next 2 chapters will be guy/girl. Is there a possibility if any other girls may show up (Fleur, Hermione Tonks Mum) in these chapter or will it be Tonks and Dudley.Author's response
The next two chapters will be Tonks' centric. I am, however, planning add-on chapters in the style of the Albus scene after Breaking the Potter Family, which will feature extra girls, the first being Fleur. I have further plans for Hermione, Ginny, Andromeda Tonks and possibly Hestia Jones.
I'm glad you like the story. I hope to have the next chapter up in a couple of months.
Couple of weeks, sorry. Mistyped.A Family Affair
(#) Bertrand 2016-02-23
You keep saying Harry would choose to stay with Tonks and that he wouldn't be forced to do it, but let's face it: he is being forced to do it, he is being forced to stay. You're making him stay, you're forcing him to go through all that. No one else.
Because it literally goes against everything that is in the character of Harry Potter to submit to anyone to such a degree as you intend to write.
Harry Potter, quite simply, doesn't take shit from people like that. You're writing an OC for all intents and purposes. Stop pretending this has anything to do with Harry Potter at all.
And yes, I will be here, in every chapter, reviewing and pointing out the flaws in the story. For as long as you keep writing horribly, I will be there to point it out.
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