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Chapter 2
After Harry and Tonks are forced to marry to avoid the Black family fortune falling into the hands of the Malfoys, what happens when the two of them have to stay at privet Drive? Why, Tonks find...
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A Family Affair
(#) Bertrand 2016-02-23
Oh and putting all the other girls in the story also makes no sense.
Seriously, why are you writing when you can't be any good at it?Author's response
I'm writing because I enjoy it, and I'm actually writing other people's requests right now. Apart from His New Slave, all my storirs that are my own ideas are non-smut stories over at Fanfiction.Net. All of those are Harry-Hermione stories, at the moment. I've got one in the works which is a Harry-Tonks story.
Seriously, why does porn have to make sense? It doesn't. Every Harry Potter character behaves OOC in porn, of course they do, Harry Potter is a fucking children's book! Harry could barely even look at girls he fancied canonically, far less have sex.
Also, why are you looking for realism in Harry Potter, a story about wizards, dragons, elves and giants?
Finally, your flame reviews have litetally no meaning to me. I love to receive constructive criticism, but if you can't be bothered and just flame, then your opinion is worth nothing to me.
If you don't like the story that much, why are you still reading it? Methinks that suggests that you are an attention seeking troll. So, this is the last time I will take the time to respond to one of your reviews.A Family Affair
(#) Jeda26 2016-02-23
just ignore bertrand, he obviously an arrogant tosser with nothing better to do to go around criticizing other peoples work and talk crap at the same time.A Family Affair
(#) Bertrand 2016-02-24
Write an AU of Harry Potter then. Don't make it follow canon events. How the hell do you expect Harry Potter to ever be intimidated by Dudley? He made fun of them all the fucking time. Even before Hogwarts. And in Hogwarts? First year, he faces Voldemort, denies him and fights him. Second year, he faces a fucking basilisk and kills it, without his wand. Third year, Dementors. Fourth year, the whole fucking Tri-Wizard Tournament and the Death Eaters with Voldemort coming back and fighting Harry afterwards.
And you somehow expect this particular version of Harry Potter to be submissive for Dudley? You expect every other witch to be submissive to a muggle? You somehow think that just because they lose their wands they're entirely powerless?
I am criticizing you fairly. If I wasn't, I'd just tell you to piss off. Instead, I am trying to point out how you're butchering characterizations of characters. How you're mangling and crippling everything for the sake of driving the porn portion of the story.
If you don't care about any semblance of plot, of character interactions, why bother with writing Harry in the story at all, if all you wanted was Tonks to fuck Dudley?
You can't use one portion of the stuff and ignore everything else. What's the point of it all? Just the porn? Then fuck plot completely. Toss it out. Toss out everything that makes Tonks 'build up' for fucking Dudley. Just have the sex scenes and be done with it.
And my complaint about realism sure as hell wasn't about magic in this story, because let's face it, you're actually going to a great length to ignore magic in the story when it would be convenient, which I pointed out in the previous chapter as well.
As for the accusation of me being an attention seeking troll, you're wrong. I wouldn't bother typing all this out for attention seeking, there's other, more simpler ways of accomplishing that. But you saying that just gives you a way to ignore legitimate complaints, so go right ahead with it.A Family Affair
(#) sopinade 2016-05-14
That is a good chapter i hope for a chapter with tonks or other harry s girlfriends getting fuck by Vernom an extra chapter perhaps still waiting for updates thank you.A Family Affair
(#) Amulius 2016-07-21
I really liked this chapter, please tell me you are posting the next chapter soon.A Family Affair
(#) Spartan1998 2018-02-19
Can make harry walk on dudley fucking tonks and he cums in her unprotected pussy thanks great story so far
A Family Affair
(#) Jeda26 2020-02-27
Hie, Tenga big fan of all your stories, with breaking the potter family being my favourite so far and was just wondering when you will have the time to update this magnificent unfinished gem of a story as it seems to have been on hiatus for a very long time?Author's response
My PC broke, and I lost my work on the last couple of chapters, plus all my other unfinished work, which included a half dozen SFW fics for another site.
It really killed my motivation for a while.
I was using an old PC not connected to the internet, because I get easily distracted and would just end up watching videos of cats falling off things. I haven't replaced it. Just always seems to be another major expense each month.
Good news, I have recently gotten a new laptop. Bad news, aforementioned easy distraction, needing to find the time (I was only working part time in a charity shop when I started, now I'm a full-time butcher), and I will have to re-read everything and try to remember where I was going to go with it.
It's not abandoned. It's just, as you say, on hiatus. But it is very much in my thoughts - I hate abandoned stories. It might not be any time soon I fear, but it will be finished.
I originally had a plan for 5 chapters if I remember right. I think I have a copy of the plans I PM'd the guy who suggested the initial idea, which was just a 'Dudley cucks Harry' story request. If I can find those plans, it will drastically cut the time it takes me to finish this. So fingers crossed :)A Family Affair
(#) Jeda26 2020-03-08
Thanks for getting back to me so quickly. So sorry to hear that and can well understand how mass technical and real world distractions an temptations of leisure and hobbies over writing.
That is great news to hear and perfectly understandable and look forward to reading it when you do get around to writing and finishing it with the remaining chapters, once you have got yourself reacquainted with the story and find the plans you had for it. So yeah my fingers are crossed that things come up aces for you in that regard.
Also noticing a reply you posted in previous reply over on the breaking of the potter family, regarding your love of Harry potter sissification and feminization stories in the style of Dark Wonker's epics, was jyst wondering if after you finish this story, if you plan to act on writing something like that? As well as whether any elements of those types will crop up in the final chapter of this story?
Author's response
I remember the original plans for this story did indeed have aspects of sissification, though not feminisation. I don't want to be more specific than that, don't want to spoil it. But my ideas in that regard are fairly firmly established, I've just got to find time to actually write it now :)
I've not really got any stories firmly planned for after this. Not any smut stories anyway, I have a few SFW plots percolating in my head I want to get out. As to my smut, I'll be seeing where my whims take me, to be honest.
As much as I enjoy Dark Wonker's sadly unfinished stories, they were mostly just a loosely connected series of events. I prefer more of a narrative tying scenes together. Anything I write, unless just a collection of one-shots, won't be quite in that style.
I'm also planning to move my smut writings over to Hentai Foundry. I'll be posting anything both here and there. I'll be including a link in the next chapter, whenever it comes out. I prefer their website layout, but I also prefer the readers and reviews here. So I'm going to just have my cake and eat it too.A Family Affair
(#) Jeda26 2020-03-09
Good to know and of course that is no problem with regards to not spoiling anything and playing cards close to your chest in that regard. That is great to hear and I look forward to reading it when you do find the time to write the rest of it.
No problem, was just curious. Regarding the SFW plots percolating in the old brain, anything in particular? Regarding smut, completely understandable and will just to wait and see where the wind and your whims take you.
Yeah as did I and it is a crying shame that he never finished them and that was certainly true of candy. Though witchcraft and cuckoldry had a slightly more narrative feel to it or tried to in my opinion. Makes complete sense as you say that kind of style would fit something like say futadom sadly finished futa one shots say.
That's a great idea and will certainly gain your stories more exposure and readers, there as is keeping posting new additions here and in allowing you as you say to keep your loyal readers and reviewers on board.
Regarding sissification and feminisation tropes, if ever decide to try your hand at them, as you clearly like them as enjoyment of DW fics shows and indicated possible desire to do so, how far would you go in extremes and kinks associated with it in all that say in a HP fandom fic?
Author's response
As far as kinks go, I'm open to writing most things. Even kinks I'm not interested in. My only limits are the most extreme ones - scat, urine, snuff, stuff like that. Those are the ones I find so offputting and neauseating I couldn't write them.
As far as genre specific kinks go? I'm open to pretty much everything. Genderbending, sisssification, feminisation, you name it.
The SFW plots are mostly based on various ideas I've had while discussing the books with friends - plot holes, weird magic and character quirks I've noticed that I want to write out.
Many are one-shots, some would take a few chapters to tell, a couple could be longer stories.
It spans all sort of ideas; the true value of a Galleon, Dumbledore explaining to Harry why he never trained him, how Invisibility Cloaks work, the extent of Tonks' Metamorphing abilities and turning common tropes about it on their heads, all kind of things.
These would go on my FF . net account, I'll include a link to that as well in the next chapter for anyone who might be interested.
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