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sorcess koko and the stone of caous.
9 reviewsa young girl who lost her parents when she was only 1 has the wrost life ever.she get hurt emotionly and pisicuelly by her peers.her foster family gives her all the work to do.she only gets gruel t...
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sorcess koko and the stone of caous.
(#) baka_neko 2006-08-27
There are online spellcheckers. USE THEM. I don't understand what you're writing at all.Author's response
well, the typeing box in ficwa needs to get a spell check.sorcess koko and the stone of caous.
(#) B-gal 2006-09-23
ok, that's it! if you plan to send more hurtful reviews like that, i suggest that you should never comment at all. you're hurting mine feelings.criessorcess koko and the stone of caous.
(#) Evil_Megalith_Labs 2006-09-24
You should learn to deal with criticism. It's one of the standards you have to contend with throughout life. Do you think all these people are simply belligerent fools? You should seriously conisder that they may indeed have a good point. It's not just a matter of rushin and wanting reviews of your work; if you type poorly it's actually hard to read and tell what you mean, which diminishes the value of what you're trying to get across in your writing, whether it be a simple PWP sort of tale or a complicated epic, or indeed everything in between. No one will hold it against you if you take two extra hours to post a story because you're reading over it and checking your spelling and grammer. It's ok to do it, and it will make your work look, read, and feel better to everyone who sees it.Author's response
you are very honest and you didn't hurt mine feelings with your crisume. i tried really hard, but i can't tell if i spell a few words wrong or not. positive crisume i can understand, but flames and anything related to it are stupid and i plan to get even with those dumb @$$ writers who think they are better then anyone else just because they type stories with no errors what so ever and they have the most perfect life ever and they feel good by picking on a writor who tries to write out her feelings to get away from his/her life, whitch sucks and their harshness doesn't help it get better!sorcess koko and the stone of caous.
(#) Rous 2006-10-13
After trying to read the first chapter, I sent you an edited copy of it, hoping you would see how it could look. Since you have not acknowledged my efforts, I can only assume you are not really serious about writing. That is too bad.
No one should feel that they cannot be creative. Trust me, I can write and I get that at home. So, you should continue to write, but you need to use all the tools at your disposal. Any craft worth undertaking is worth doing well. You cannot bake a cake without pans or flour; you cannot write stories without grammar basics and spelling skills. Get them and use them. Then people will be more responsive to your efforts.
And stop biting the hands that try to help you. That is just juvenile and makes us wonder if you really are six or seven.
I am all for allowing children to flex their wings and play with the adults, but if you are going to swim with the big fishes, you need to keep up. I for one do not tolerate children who interact with me acting like children. Try to use a little common sense and maturity. Or else go back to the playground and finish growing up. That may be harsh, but it is no harsher than your comments to those trying to help you. Name calling is for the immature and unimaginative. Continue in this mein and you only prove everyone's point.
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