- I'm glad I read this...you write Lulu well, and I'd imagine it would be challenging to age her back to five. Everything lives in the details here --the thumb sucking habit, the description of the weaving, the fumbling attempts at comfort. I feel her rage and wonder how much it drove her. She seemed so calm in-game, and yet, paradoxically, so willing to die for the cause.
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