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• souress koko and the stone of caious.

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-08-26

  You need a good beta for this story. At the very least, a run through spellchecker would help.

  Author's response

  what's a beta?

• souress koko and the stone of caious.

  (#) FruitBat 2006-09-23

  Instead of being defensive, why not try actually listening to people's suggestions? Obviously you can't spell and your grammar is very poor. We're not going to go easy on you because you say we're "hurting your feelings" or whatever your excuse is. Your readers don't owe you anything.
  
  Okay, you say you're typing this out in ficwad's text entry box? WHY? Most computers come with a word processing program that includes a spellchecker. If not, try this free program: http://www.salsbury.f2s.com/rd_download.htm or one of the many others.
  
  Or just look at how a sentence is constructed. See how the letters are capitalized at the beginning of each sentence? This is very basic stuff.
  
  You also seem to be missing words entirely. Try reading what you've written out loud and you'll see.
  
  Now you have a choice - either whine and call me a big meanie, or actually try to improve yourself.

• souress koko and the stone of caious.

  (#) EnchantedFaery 2006-09-24

  OMG! Did u know that by writing this, u are commiting some seriouls plagiarism! Not only that, but before u decide to post a story, u realy should find a beta or use a spell checker, I know this has been said many times, but it's going to keep being said until u do something about it. I mean I couldn't even read the sumary before I felt like I was reading a story written by a 7 year old! It's not that easy to write a story and it's even harder to listen to people telling u that they don't like your stuff, but that's life, u think that everyone is going to pat u on the back and tell u ur doing a good job even when they don'te mean it? What are you 5? I know this sounds rude, but I've seen the little snarky comments u give to people when all they are trying to do is help. Do us all a favor...PLEASE remove your stories or fix them! And by the way...Even if this story is about a girl with green eyes, it's still the Harry Potter Story, use ur own stuff or write a disclaimer.

  Author's response

  I'M NOT RIPPING IT OFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!! YOU'RE A DUMB @$$.

• souress koko and the stone of caious.

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14

  really good!!

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