(#) cloudenstein 2009-01-15A great start of what could become a
Like the two previous reviews, I would like to see more of this in the future.
Also, I congratulate you on the fact that there are very few mistakes in your grammar, but still, it would do good to re-check it from time to time.
Keep on the good work friend.
Let's hope this is not a one-shot ;)
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