- Sweet story so far. I love the pacing and I like the fact that everybody is doubting Harry and what he is able and will be able to do. Keep it up.
Author's responseThanks for taking the time to review. Glad you like the story so far.
- Are you using song titles as chapter titles? i swear "The God That Failed" is a Metallica song, and "Until The End" is Breaking Benjamin...both great bands.
They work well as titles as well, so good job finding ones that fit and great story so far...keep writing!!!
Author's responseGood Call. You are absolutely right, my Chapters are named after songs. At first I tried to come up with original titles for them, but everything I came up with sounded stupid. I decided to use songs that fit how I wanted each chapter to 'feel' and I'm happy with the way its worked out so far. Plus, when my story is finished, it will have its own soundtrack of sorts. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. The next chapter, titled 'Vicarious', will be out soon.
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