- That was an amazing duel, the form Harry fight was really good, even if the intension was to just free Slughorn.
I just need to know it the reason he transform, is because he have some werewolf traits?(transform at will) or was something Voldemort relase from the mind of Harry? what did Voldemort see that make him scream in terror? and did Harry consume felix felicis before the duel and that help him in some way?
I really hope that nobody outside really trusting people learn of the transformation of Harry, it will make a good weapon if he can control it.
Also Harry needs to learn occulmency really soon (maybe he can practice and learn with Hermione ;] ).
And I hope that Bellatrix have a permament scar and Voldemort something really crippling(maybe lost use of the arm, after all werewolfs are magical creatures with great power),it will be great if Harry maim(sp?) Voldermort.
Any way I really hope to read next chapter soon is making even more interesting ever chapter.
Author's responseThanks. Glad you like it. His transformation, and duel with Voldemort will be revealed at later chapters. Felix Felicis did help him. Harry will continue to learn magic. I doubt Bellatrix will let a scar mar her beauty. Voldemort probably had his anti-wolf shots. Still revising next chapters.
(#) allowaycar 2006-09-17Wow. Just wow. I just sat and read your whole storry. It's an inventive and totally original take on the AU. Love it. While I would love to tell you to hurry up and update, I hope you take the time to make any new chapters as great as the previous.
Author's responseThanks. Glad you like it.
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-14WoW this is great, Wow this was well thought out and well written. You definitely should think about writing professionally! I sure hope you continue this, cause I was sitting on the edge of my seat thru alot of this!
Author's responseThanks. I don't know about writing professionally though. Hopefully, I can post the new chapters this weekend.
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