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Beginning of the Afterlife
3 reviewsSamantha, a Young girl from England, moves to a new home after her parents died, a home called 'Matties Orphanage.' A VERY large building with hundereds of rooms and secret corridors. Samantha feel...
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(#) herk444 2006-09-27
Very nice, altho the description does seem a bit forced at times, I like the way you made the girl seem so distraught. And any story that takes place in past england is always good!
Looking foreward for more chapters!
Lovely
--herkie--
((p.s. I myself have a story in progress that takes place past england, with a young female as the main character. If you had time, would yo mind reading it?))[untitled]
(#) herk444 2006-09-27
Very nice, altho the description does seem a bit forced at times, I like the way you made the girl seem so distraught. And any story that takes place in past england is always good!
Looking foreward for more chapters!
Lovely
--herkie--
((p.s. I myself have a story in progress that takes place past england, with a young female as the main character. If you had time, would yo mind reading it?))[untitled]
(#) herk444 2006-09-27
Very nice, altho the description does seem a bit forced at times, I like the way you made the girl seem so distraught. And any story that takes place in past england is always good!
Looking foreward for more chapters!
Lovely
--herkie--
((p.s. I myself have a story in progress that takes place past england, with a young female as the main character. If you had time, would yo mind reading it?))
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