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Fire and Ice
(#) CrimsonRogue 2006-04-10
Really good work. I do like the way you incorporated the title into the story. Quite well written, and a really nice concept.Fire and Ice
(#) unluckydesertrider 2006-07-13
wow this is a good story
got some crazy things happenin in it like harry havin a sister
keep up the good work i look forward to readin the next chapterFire and Ice
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-09-08
SO far this story is very good. It feels rushed as far as relationship between Harry and Rose. Additionally, there is absolutely no confrontation with Ginny in regards to her feelings for Harry, which is completely OOC. Please update soon and take my comments as criticism, but not bashing.Fire and Ice
(#) JustAReader 2007-03-22
I don't supose your still writing this because that would really be great.Fire and Ice
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-05-08
First off, I hope that you are not dead and just have a severe case of writer's cramp. That being said, you've had more than enough time to soak that hand in some nice hot water, get a soothing massage on it and get back to work. I like this story. I've been hoping that you just got caught up in not getting too many reviews. The only down side I see to it is that you need more Blaise in it because she wasn't a mainstream character in canon and with that you need to build upon her character and make her someone that the reader can identify with. I really do hope that you decide to write again.
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(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-01-18
Great story.
I hope to see Dobby & Winky helping Harry.
I would be nice to have the other creatures helping Harry as well.
Please update soon?
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