"No, Bren..." I gasped. I was so out of breath I couldn't even finish his name. He looked upset, like a kid who had just been told that he couldn't have an ice pop before dinner. "Not here." I gasp...
i liked it! you should make a longer story based on this...hahha, i liked it that much!
Soooo good! I loved it. I've seen the picture you mentioned and my favorite song of Panic! is "Lying is the Most Fun" and just to see someone write a story based on those is really awesome. And I really liked how Ryan was written in this. :)
Grawr, that was amazing.. I love it. Haha. Yay.
nothing makes me happier then a brendon/ryan slash. hooray!
I love your story!!! please write more soon!!! PLEASE!!!
Ahhgagagagaagg... I'm sorry. I've nothing to go off of. I'm not writing any more on this. I'm so tired of Kimmie telling me "WRITE MORE" that I'm just gonna say it here so she has no one else to back her up. I'm not writing any more on this fanfic. It was a one shot. I'm perfectly happy with how it ended, and I cannot see any way to pick it back up. So I'm sorry, but no. No more on this story. Maybe I'll write another Bden/Ry story later, but not this one!
Sorry for freaking out...
im sorry i didnt review on this before but this story made me thing in dirty ways and i loved it...i actually got inspired to write stories from this one but my stories will never in a million years top this one. if i could i would marry this story i love it so much keep writeing and keep rocking
This is such a hot story. It's really funny, because in the middle of this my sister (also a Panic! fan) sent me an IM saying "Brendon Urie + Ryan Ross kissing = HOT". It was just so fitting for the moment.
I have a friend that's like "Oh Kari...They are SOOOO gay together"...Love the story!
this is such a well written story!! i loved it i would love to hear it from brendons point of view that would be the icing on the cake but i love this so its all good thanx luv fabby xxxx
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