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50 Breaths
(#) mjules 2006-09-24
This was quite clever; so many poignant moments with different flavors and textures to them. You remained very true to their personalities and made the relationship plausible. And all this in one-sentence fragments!50 Breaths
(#) MsCommandersons 2007-01-26
I'm not certain how to rate this story!
It was hot:
Slammed up against protesting wood, the grey-eyed boy let his fingers dig into the grain as a clever tongue traced a line across his neck.
It was funny:
While Ayame whirled around the room displaying his latest fashion creation, Haru commented that it would match Kyo's complexion perfectly; the three-way chase that ensued was worth a bruised arm or two.
It was frightening:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are..." Akito whispered, finger tracing a pattern over polished oak before slamming his fist down hard enough to crack.
And poignant:
Autumn left a carpet of dried leaves on the ground and Kyo broke them with every step, without a care; they were only dead things, in the end.
Beautifully written! I must read more of your work!50 Breaths
(#) kaden292 2007-06-29
Is this a challenge for someone else to do or something you did, because I ambe very tempted to continue a story for this challenge!!!
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