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Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) Gryffonswings 2006-09-22
"Dónde usted puso mi camisa?" Isn't grammatically correct. It should be se puso, not usted puso. And...if she is talking to Harry, it should probably be the informal version: te pusaste. At least, from what I remember of spanish, that should be the correct conjugation, but it has been a couple years.Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) Shaggy37 2006-09-22
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I love this story, every time you update I love it even more and now I Siriusly can't wait till chapter 7 comes up...does the pee pee dance in anticiaption while he waits for chapter 7 anyways do keep up the amazingly oustandingly awesome work and update soon please:):):):):):):):):):)Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) rowinr 2006-09-22
Great chapter your story is comeing out great looking forward to see how the next chapter is.Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) rowinr 2006-09-22
Great chapter your story is comeing out great looking forward to see how the next chapter is.Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) bmatsea 2006-09-22
Let me start off and say that your story is wonderfull. I like the interaction of Maria and Harry, Its feels natural the way its writen. I'm glad that this last update was quicker than pervious chapters. Looking forward to more from this.Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) Nautilus 2006-09-22
brilliant again. really well done with the story, i look forward to when you will have the next chapter out. What will people think of Maria? I guess Dumbles will be concerned but fine - though will he want her as a weapon. I guess if his feelling for Harry are true then the will respectfully as a grandfather, give his blessing (not that they need it). What abou the others though. Hermione is sure to know of who Maria is and what she is capable of, but knowing that Maria was the one who looked after Harry when he was injuried, should help but there heart at ease.
What will Remus, Molly, Ron, Severus think of the NEW Harry. should be fun... cheers.. and welll done.. hope to see the meeting soon.Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) yojorocks 2006-09-22
Very nicely done, especially the part about Madeye being his paraniod self. You really went above and beyond yourself for this chapter, and you really struck a chord (or is it cord? I can never remember) with Maria and her fear of losing Harry. Honestly I can't wait for how Hermione reacts once Harry reveals his "true" nature; that is going to be a very enjoyable chapter. I really liked what you did with her in this chapter: you managed to balance her respect for authority with her need to assert herself in a surprisingly small amount of space. I am kind of disappointed you didn't have more Ron, but that should be remedied in the upcoming chapters, right?
Please, please use Slytherin-side Harry more often, I liked the sneak peak of it. Keep up the superb work!Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) wretchedmongrel 2006-09-22
schweeet! I'm dying for the meeting of Maria & the order... wonder what our dear Ginny will think of her?Perfect Shades of Indigo
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-09-22
An awesome fic. I can't wait till the meet the real Harry
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