(#) tsukiyuuki 2007-01-05That was beautiful. Using the contemplation of bridges as a catalyst to lead to showing the relationship between Haku and Chihiro was a really great idea, and it turned out really nicely.
The comments made in the parentheses in italics were also a really nice effect. ^_^
- That was so touching. A beautiful display of metaphores and the inner workings of your protagonists' hearts. Though I wish they had found each other in the end, the way you closed the story was perfectly done. You could not have done a better job. Neither could I! ;)
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