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- In your summary, "esk" should be "esque"
Some of the punctuation is off. Investigate the use of semi-colons.
If something is 'needless to say,' don't say it.
The parentheses throw it off sometimes.
It's an interesting tale, though. It would be a lot easier to read if someone went over some of the punctuation, though.
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