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Forgotten Moon
3 reviewsThe world can change with a simple word. To find out that your whole life is a lie, that your crush loves you back and that you can change into a wolf any time you like is bitter sweet. Can she kee...
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Forgotten Moon
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-15
Well, it was difficult to read that's for sure. Hey, try spilting the paragraphs apart when you preview your stories. Ok? Other than that, this is really good. I hoping for more.Forgotten Moon
(#) confuzzld 2006-10-16
My only pointer is if you could like double space it would be easier to read , but otherwise I l-o-v-e it !
I really really like this . I love how you worded it ,and how it seemed to flow together so perfectly .
Like I said only complaint just please double space it or something so it is easier to read .
Please R&R my story in return . Thanks
Write on .
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(#) fishey 2010-03-08
yeah double spaceing would be great but keep wrighting!!! i love it :)
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