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Casserole
(#) Ithilwen 2007-06-08
The author's note added a lot of depth, but shouldn't it be depth that comes out in the story proper? The things you mention -- the woman's brown hair having been dyed, the woman swatting his hand away because she doesn't like her neck toughed -- just don't show through in the original in its current form.
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