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God Has No Place Here
(#) Kettles 2006-10-03
3 words, dude: incest, vignette, and vampire ^^
i can completely see the incest a-coming, and i must admit... getting the ickyness shivers, but that's just me.
the vignette you described is beautiful, and i love the quirky little fold over jaink.
as for the whole Dragulia thing...sighs anything to insert your lover in the story eh? ^^ just screwin witcha, it sounds like it's gonna be fun.
again, minor grammar errors and whatnot, but who gives a crap about that when you wrote it so well? ....i swear to god, if you say the spell checker i'll cut you ><
heheheheh. good shtuff herkie baby, write more....NOW! cocks gunAuthor's response
Haha, yes, do not let the incest bother you. In the 1700's is was actually quite common for cousins to marry. ((pride and predjust is an example)) But don't worry, there is more to the story than just all of the tension and whatnot, but I don't want to give away too much.
As for the vignette, yes. I am quite proud of it.
As for Vladislaus, I could simply not help myself. Don't worry, he does actually have a purpose besides looking pretty.
And you know how my grammar refuses to conform, psh... who needs it. ((JK))
I shall be posting chappie three by sat I think, It depends on how much time I get to myself and my computer.
alone....
bwahahaha
love! herkieGod Has No Place Here
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14
cool, this is very niceAuthor's response
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