- Very cute, excited to see what will happen. I like that Kaorin has a chance in this story, most fics she only worries over the crush and never gets an opening. It's refreshing to see a story that shows that Kaorin is a stronger character than you might think, that she could really go after Sakaki.
Can't wait to read more.
- I enjoyed this; I loved the comparisons of the three to cats; the way that Kaorin is paranoid about Kagura, Kagura's enthusiasm and the way that she was trying to help Kaorin out.
I think you did really good characterisation here and I quite enjoyed this story.
- I like this so far ^^ I think you have a good story base, and besides a slight overuse of the word 'tomboy' I couldn't find much wrong with it. Eheh, sadly enough what caught my eye was that someone rated this as illiterate--which was totally unfair and wrong, by the way--and I wanted to see if it was true, because I'm stupidly masochistic like that. Anyways, I really did like this. Kaorin and Kagura were perfectly portrayed, and the references to cats were a nice descriptive bonus. Good job! ^_^
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