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• Awake in a Dream

  (#) citrus-lime 2006-10-03

  YOU ROCK!!! you are my altime fav author (besides me of course) right more!!! ps read my story.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Wow. I'll be sure to read it.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-10-03

  ack, excellent as usual, i can't wait for the next chappie! i wonder if anything will be awkward since Archie admitted his feelings to Atlanta

  Author's response

  Thank you very much. I'll update as soon as I can. And you'll have to wait and see.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) citrus-lime 2006-10-03

  OHHH a clif hanger! what will happen next! HEY jay gets a wish dosent he? and threasa could have got out some how right? wrght more!

  Author's response

  I know. And yes Jay gets a wish doesn't he? But remember Jay isn't really feeling like himself... so something might happen unexpectedly. HINT!

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) citrus-lime 2006-10-03

  id put your name in my fovourite authors spot but i cant spell your name woho right more!

  Author's response

  N-U-U-O-A-E-C-L-A-I-R-E lol. Thanks I will.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) story_master 2006-10-03

  That has to be one of my favourite chapters of your entire story! Yay! Archie confessed his feelings to Atlanta. I feel bad for Jay, but hopefully you didn't kill Theresa for good. This chapter was really moving. And I was shivering too as I read the last two paragraphs. Keep up the astonishing work! Can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) Pheonee 2006-10-05

  Nrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmcccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhzzzzzzzzzzmmmmmmmhugllllllllllllllllll...
  
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  It was GOOD.
  
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  Now I know why I like your stories so much...
  
  They're FULL.
  
  They're full, full of emotion and description and mood. They're rich and bittersweet and creamy and sharp. They're comparable to brownies sometimes (and trust me, I discovered brownies four hours ago and I'm in heaven) and other times, broccoli. (And I like broccoli!) They're just so visual. I can really see what you can see. I just love it so much. You can feel what they feel, see and hear and smell and even taste what they see and hear and smell and even taste. You open a new world for us, and it's one just as unpredictable and sweet as this one right here.
  
  Remember, way back in the fifth or so chapter, when I told you you were the next J.K. Rowling? I haven't changed my mind. Brush that grammar! Fix those typos! Make your order of words pleasing and comfortable! Big, out-of-the-box words aren't always the best words. Sometimes, you'd go for something really good, and you totlaly ignore the fact it's not pleasing to the mind--"I've use a really cool adjectival phrase, so it's good enough"--You gotta learn to ditch that habit. Do that. And you'd be very close to the publisher's.
  
  Keep up the good work. Just because you're super good, doesn't mean you can just ditch it all and give up Ficwad altogether. You're only fifteen, and you still do have a work to do. You go, girl. (Urgh, my girly friend is rubbing off me...)
  
  ~Pheph
  
  PS: I wrote a book! ;)

  Author's response

  Wow! Saying that was one of the most helpful reviews is the beiggest understatement of the year. I feel... great! (I like broccoli)
  
  It's really impossiblle to tell you how much you just made my day! And yes I know 'the grammar'. That is what I'd call 'I-hate-word-documents'. Oh and me having a bad case of 'I-need-to-update'! Sometimes I don't even proof read. I'll do that now.
  
  As for the phrases. I'll try. I think of somthing poetic and have it fit in. The vocabulairy words are just me. (^-^) I'll try!
  
  Thanks. I'm trying to write another real book, but I would never ditch this place. Thank you. And P.S. I'm actually 13. XD

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