(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-08I´m very intrigued by your story because you´re pulling in so many (little) details that really happened to Pete/ FOB. I´m doing the completely opposite thing because a) it gives me more freedom and b) I´m as lazy as tuna paté. Very impressive how you set up the atmosphere in this chapter. Can´t wait to read how Ryan witnessed the whole thing from his point of view.
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